2009年5月21日 星期四
Karen's Weight-loss Tips
Karan was heavy, so she wanted to go on diet, she started her lose weight plant, she ran fast every day and didn't eat fast food anymore because she didn't want to put on weight again, so she ate more and more fruits and vegetables to make health by herself, now she is thin and beautiful, so she is happy that she delit. ~The End~
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回覆刪除1. Karan was heavy, so she wanted to go on diet,
→Karen was fat, so she wanted to go on a diet.
2. she started her lose weight plant,
→ she started her weight-loss plan.
3. she ran fast every day and didn't eat fast food anymore
→ She goes jogging every day and doesn't eat fast food anymore.
4. because she didn't want to put on weight again, so she ate more and more fruits and vegetables to make health by herself,
→ Because she doesn't want to put on weight, she eats a lot of fruit and vegetables.
5. now she is thin and beautiful, so she is happy that she delit.
→ Now, she is thin and beautiful and she is happy about it.